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Thursday, 17 November 2011

My Castle

                                 I built this castle alone,
                                         placing each brick by
                                         hand.
                                 The moat being dug by
                                         hand and filled with
                                         tears.
                                 And when I finished with
                                         a fortress that no one could
                                         destroy -
                                 I walked away.

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5 comments:

  1. GOVMANSLAUGHTER25 December 2011 at 16:38

    Your tears drifted to Me

    They made made me Cry

    Not with sorrow but with joy

    As I found a comrade to fight my worry's

    As a brother in arms

    Thank You

    ;o) XXX

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  2. Tina Helt27 December 2011 at 04:30

    I really like this alot!

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  3. Welshcakes Limoncello17 March 2012 at 20:36

    It's lovely.

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  4. Angeliz L25 April 2012 at 15:09

    It's Beautiful

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  5. Leif G.S. Notae21 August 2012 at 13:04

    This is a great poem, I am glad you shared this with us.

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