Pages

▼

Sunday 1 January 2012

Awakening


Pain abounds

where pleasure

should be

Lost to sight

lost to me

My hopes

crumbled

yet again Will I ever

really be

free

Again

it comes pleasure

or is it

pain

in disguise that I see

before my

eyes

Around

I go Hoping

the pleasure

will replace

the pain someday
at

3 comments:

  1. william manson18 August 2012 at 21:38

    pain can be a barrier friend, you described it very well in this cool poem, also liked the graphic ;)

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous6 October 2012 at 14:06

    Thank u.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Nada Adel9 September 2013 at 10:10

    Beautiful and touching piece.
    I like how the short lines reflect the pain and confusion within.

    ReplyDelete

Thank You For Taking The Time To Leave Me A Message. Feedback is very valuable.