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Friday 13 April 2012

Everything, For Always

Hold me, like you will never let me go,
Kiss me, take my breath and make it yours,
Love me, with a force before not known,
Take me, from the depths up to the heights,
Protect me, as I will always be your protector,
Enslave me, make me yours, never set me free,
Devour me, make us as one upon this earth,
Trust me, For I will never let you down,
Desire me, I am all you will ever need,
Be careful with me, I break easily.


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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 August 2011 at 22:56

    this is so awesome thank you for sharing :)
    Amy

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  2. Despoina Theodoridou6 September 2011 at 14:18

    This poem shout out of love, both through its spoken words and through its unspoken ones!
    It made me shiver.
    Keep up the good work; you're very talented!

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  3. Nessie Richards19 January 2012 at 11:29

    Thoroughly enjoyed this - full of emotion

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  4. Nessie Richards19 January 2012 at 11:30

    so much feeling & emotion - a powerful piece :)

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  5. Anonymous10 May 2012 at 02:33

    So deeply moving, honest and courageous is your poem.

    My wish for you is that you have someone in your life that is loving, understands your fears and needs. Patient, accepting, understanding, honesty, and loyal. Holding your heart ever so gently!

    ~Nina Fox

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  6. Anonymous10 May 2012 at 03:26

    Nothing fancy ...I love this especially the end

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  7. Anonymous17 May 2012 at 18:05

    it made me shiver, powerful

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